# GMAT Parallelism: Once Outside or Twice Inside

First, here are a few questions to whet your appetite:

1) The CEO attributed the relative success of Framingham Corporation to both their traditional values and to the CFO’s innovative reorganization of the divisional income scheme.

(A) to both their traditional values and to

(B) to both its traditional values and

(C) both to its traditional values and

(D) both to their traditional values and

(E) both to their traditional values and to

2) In the United States, a jury consists either of six citizens, in a civil case, or the twelve required by a criminal case.

(A) either of six citizens, in a civil case, or the twelve required by

(B) either of six citizens, in a civil case, or of the twelve required by

(C) either of six citizens, in a civil case, or the twelve required for

(D) of either six citizens, in a civil case, or of the twelve required for

(E) of either six citizens, in a civil case, or the twelve required for

3) Direct democratic governance, exemplifying not the United States’ Electoral College but most of the systems of Western European nations, has its roots in the innovative system of ancient Athens.

(A) exemplifying not the United States’ Electoral College but

(B) exemplifying not the United States’ Electoral College but by

(C) exemplified not by the United States’ Electoral College but by

(D) exemplified not by the United States’ Electoral College but

(E) exemplified by not the United States’ Electoral College but by

Explanations will follow below.

## Parallelism

Obviously, the GMAT loves to test parallelism on Sentence Correction.  One of the advantages of parallelism — and one of the tricky things about it — is that we don’t have to repeat in the second branch words that were said in the first branch. For example, we don’t have to say:

That sentence, of course, is an unholy nightmare!  Parallelism allows for a remarkable simplification:

4b) Doug goes to his hometown to visit his family more than Marcia does.

Here, we used the trick of repeating a predicate.  Parallelism is extraordinary, because it allows for an efficient streamlining of a rather sophisticated set of ideas.

Often, both elements in parallelism will have the same introductory word: for example, if prepositional phrases are in parallel, the preposition itself applies to both branches.  The rules of parallelism allow one either to repeat the preposition or not, under ordinary circumstances.

5a) The CEO went to the conference with the financial office staff and with the HR director.

5b) The CEO went to the conference with the financial office staff and the HR director.

Both of those sentences are grammatically correct.  They may imply slightly different things, but that’s a level of subtlety with which the GMAT is not concerned in the least.  Notice, though, that technically in #5a, the two separate prepositional phrases are in parallel, and in #5b, there’s just one prepositional phrase and the two objects are in parallel within that single prepositional phrase.  Another way to say that is: in #5a, the parallelism begins before the prepositions and includes them, whereas in #5b, the parallelism begins after the preposition and is included within the prepositional phrase.  Technically, the two structures are quite different, but the only difference is the presence or absence of the second preposition, and both are 100% correct.

## Correlative conjunctions & parallelism

If P and Q are the two elements in parallel, then most forms of parallelism involve some word or words between P and Q.  Sometimes, though, there’s a matched pair of words, correlative conjunctions, which are used together to establish the parallel structure.  Examples include:

either A or B

neither A nor B

both A and B

not A but B

not only A but also B

not just A but also B

not so much A as B

between A and B

Notice, when we use a correlative conjunction, then the first word clearly establishes where the parallelism begins.  Hmm.  As you may surmise, this raises some tricky issues with respect to where we might put a preposition preceding parallel elements.

## Once outside or twice inside

Suppose we want to put two elements in parallel that have a preposition.  Let’s pick the preposition “to” as an example.  We want to put the elements “to P” and “to Q” in parallel.  Now, suppose they are going to be joined by a correlative conjunction, say, “not only … but also“.  The questions are: do we use one “to” or two “to‘s”, and where do we put the “to‘s”?

It turns out, as with #5a and #5b above, there are two different perfectly correct structures.   As in #5a, we can have separate prepositional phrases in parallel, so the preposition is included both times as part of the parallelism; or as in #5b, we can have the parallelism happening within the prepositional phrase, following the preposition, so that the preposition itself stands outside the parallelism.  The first of these I will call the “twice inside” case, and the second I will call the “once outside” case.  Here are the two correct structures:

6a) not only to P but also to Q (twice inside)

6b) to not only P but also Q (once outside)

Both of those are 100% grammatically and logically correct.  Obviously, those very precise forms admit of different kinds of “near miss” forms that are completely wrong:

Those are wrong 100% of the time on the GMAT.  If you are not reading carefully, or don’t think through the precise logic, then it would be easy to mistake #6c and #6d for the correct forms, and indeed many GMAT takers do just that.  Understanding the deep logic of the sentence organization can help you distinguish the always-correct forms from the always-incorrect forms.

## Summary

It may be that, in reading this argument, this topic has come into slightly better focus: if so, you may want to re-try the sentences at the top of the article before reading the solutions below.  Here’s another practice GMAT Sentence Correct problem from inside the product:

If you would like to say anything about this topic, or ask a question, then please let us know in the comments sections.

## Practice problem solutions

1) Split #1: pronoun error.  Framingham Corporation is a collective noun: while it may have many employees, it is singular, and demands the singular pronoun, “its“.  The pronoun “their” is incorrect, and choices (A) & (D) & (E) make this mistake.

Split #2: placement of the preposition and the correlative conjunctions:

(A) to both … and to … (once outside, once inside = incorrect)

(B) to both … and … (once outside = correct)

(C) both to … and  … (once inside = incorrect)

(D) both to … and  … (once inside = incorrect)

(E) both to … and to … (twice inside = correct)

Because of both of these splits, (B) is the only possible answer.

2) Split #1: logical mistake.  Both “required by” and “required for” are grammatically correct, but they mean very different things.  We  have to think about the meaning in context.  The fundamental contrast of the sentence concerns: how many folks on a civil jury vs. how many folks on a criminal jury — that’s 6 vs. 12.  What the sentence wants to say is “the twelve required for a criminal case.”  In other words, something else, outside of the sentence, requires a criminal jury to have 12 members.  That’s the correct meaning.  (BTW, various Supreme Court decisions established jury size.)

The structure “the twelve required by a criminal case” means that, somewhere unspecified, there’s a single criminal case that, for some reason, has made a requirement, a requirement for “the twelve” to do something, what we don’t know!!  That’s nonsense!! That is completely different from the contrast the sentence is trying to establish.  Therefore, the choices with “by“, choices (A) and (B), are incorrect.

Split #2: placement of the preposition and the correlative conjunctions:

(A) either of …. or … (once inside = incorrect)

(B) either of …. or of … (twice inside = correct)

(C) either of …. or … (once inside = incorrect)

(D) of either …. or of … (once outside, once inside = incorrect)

(E) of either …. or … (once outside = correct)

Because of both of these splits, (E) is the only possible answer.

3) Split #1: part vs. whole, “exemplifying” vs. “exemplified by“.  What’s an example of what?  Well, the big category is “direct democratic governance“, and individual countries do or don’t fall into this overarching category.  We say “[specific] exemplifies [general]” or “[general] is exemplified by [specific].”  The subject here is the big category, the general, so we need “is exemplified by.”  The choices with the active “exemplifying“, choices (A) & (B) are incorrect.

Split #2: placement of the preposition and the correlative conjunctions.  We will consider only the last three choices, and the placement of “by” that accompanies the passive voice.

(C) not by …. but by … (twice inside = correct)

(D) not by …. but … (once inside = incorrect)

(E) by not …. but by … (once outside, once inside = incorrect)

Because of both of these splits, (C) is the only possible answer.

### 13 Responses to GMAT Parallelism: Once Outside or Twice Inside

1. Ronak Sharma December 3, 2019 at 3:14 am #

Dear Mike,

Great articles! I’m preparing for my 3rd attempt and have only recently discovered these articles and I have to say they’re an eye opener.

I have a query. While trying to solve example 1, in spite of the pronoun error, I went with choice E. My reason for rejecting choice B “to both its traditional values and” was that “both” seems to signify the number of traditional values that the company has while choice E has “both” before the preposition “to.” So I assumed the CEO, to sound inclusive of ownership of the company with the employees, used “their” to signify common ownership.

Could you kindly guide me to the correct analysis?

• Magoosh Test Prep Expert February 3, 2020 at 11:17 am #

Hi Ronak,

Great question! Thanks for being specific.

All 5 answer choices contain the word “both,” so we can’t remove that word. Instead we need to understand what it refers to. We have no evidence in the sentence to indicate that we know the specific number of traditional values that the company has. And values, or social beliefs, are usually not counted.

“Both” obviously indicates that we are referring to two items. The usage of “both” in all 5 answer choices refers to the same two items: the values and the reorganization. So our job is to identify which answer choices use the preposition “to” correctly along with the word both and the the conjunction “and.”

Pronoun errors are very common on the GMAT. Don’t ever, ever ignore them! On the exam, if you see a pronoun issue and feel like you should overlook it, then you know that you are misunderstanding some part of the sentence.

I hope that helps!

2. Shitandi April 17, 2018 at 11:37 pm #

Hi Mike,

You’ve done a wonderful job of explaining things!
The main difference between the 2 choices that I’ve picked up is the use of ‘for’ and ‘by’.

• Magoosh Test Prep Expert April 21, 2018 at 1:35 pm #

You’re correct that the relevant split here involves by vs. for.

Things are usually required “by” a person that requests them, or a law that requires them. Things are usually required for an event or successful action (such as the successful coordination of a legal event, e.g. a criminal case that is tried by jury).

3. cal November 29, 2017 at 6:39 pm #

This is great! As an avid reader who has no clue about the formal rules of grammar, I’m usually able to boil down hard questions to two choices and invariably end up stumbling because of one of these small but important rules. This provides a lot of clarity on what i suspect is the number one culprit of mine on SC.

THank you!

4. Sonakshi October 10, 2013 at 6:51 am #

Hi Mike, This was really helpful. I was almost always making this sort of mistake.
Would you mind clearing one more doubt please:
out of the two grammatical correct choices ( one outside and two inside), do we always choose the shorter one ? or any specific preposition disobey this rule ?

• Mike October 10, 2013 at 10:14 am #

Dear Sonakshi,
First of all, all prepositions obey this rule — this is one of these rare “no exceptions” grammar rules. 🙂
As far as choosing between them — the GMAT will not make you do that. Both are 100% correct. The GMAT never has you pick between two 100% flawless elements —- if both appear among the answer choices, I guarantee that one of them will have some other error. For example, in #1, choice (B) has the correct “once outside” structure, and (E) has the correct “twice inside” structure —- but (E) has a clear pronoun mistake. There will always be something else, some other kind of error, that allows you to choose.
Mike 🙂

5. Ammad October 3, 2013 at 5:46 am #

Why didn’t I get across your articles earlier ?! You’re great man!

• Mike October 3, 2013 at 10:18 am #

Thank you for your kind words. I’m very glad you have found this helpful. Best of luck to you!
Mike 🙂

6. Terence August 30, 2013 at 6:41 pm #

At last! A GMAT study guide that offers complete coverage of difficult quantitative GMAT topics!

• Mike September 1, 2013 at 2:37 pm #

Terence,
I’m glad you found it helpful. Best of luck to you.
Mike 🙂

7. Sumanth August 24, 2013 at 12:32 am #

Excellent article Mike.

• Mike August 24, 2013 at 1:20 pm #

Dear Sumanth,
I’m glad you liked it. Best of luck to you.
Mike 🙂

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