TOEFL Tuesday: Can a TOEFL Essay Be Too Long?

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How much is too much? Everybody knows that writing an essay that’s too short is a problem. But sometimes, students ask about the maximum essay length, thinking that either the graders will take off points or that the essay will simply be cut off, not able to continue.

But I can say in short, there is no maximum. You can write an enormous essay and get a perfect score.

Official recommendations from ETS

ETS (the company that makes the TOEFL) gives specific numbers for essay length in all their preparation material and during the actual test. The recommendations are simple:

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Integrated essay: 150 – 225 words
Independent essay: 300 words

These aren’t maximum scores, nor are they minimums. But to be honest, an essay that’s shorter than these recommended lengths may not get a perfect score. Usually, top scoring essays are longer.

Still, writing much more does not mean a higher score.

Quantity and quality

There’s a clear reason why shorter essays might have lower scores—they don’t have enough room to include details. That means the essay is not just shorter, but also lower quality. A longer essay gives enough room to add those important details.

Still, a long essay can cause a problem. Imagine trying to write 1000 words in 30 minutes for the independent essay. How much will you be able to focus on grammar, vocabulary, structure, and clarity? Not much. The more you write, the less attention you can pay to each word and sentence.

In other words, it’s possible to write too much, but only because you’re not focusing on the more important aspects of your essay. It’s possible to write a 1000 word essay and get a perfect score, but I don’t recommend trying it. It’s much easier to write a 400 or 500 word essay with a perfect score.

So first, try to reach the recommended lengths from ETS. If you can write more, that’s best. But don’t worry about writing two times the recommended length—it’s better to focus on quality at that point, not quantity.

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Lucas Fink

Lucas is the teacher behind Magoosh TOEFL. He’s been teaching TOEFL preparation and more general English since 2009, and the SAT since 2008. Between his time at Bard College and teaching abroad, he has studied Japanese, Czech, and Korean. None of them come in handy, nowadays.

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22 responses to “TOEFL Tuesday: Can a TOEFL Essay Be Too Long?”

apoorva

August 27, 2017

hi lucas, i could nit finish last line of my independent essay. will that result in deduction?

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  August 28, 2017
  
  Hi Apoorva,
  
  There is a small chance that it will affect your score a bit, but if the rest of your essay was strong, it will be fine. 🙂
  
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Aishwarya

September 9, 2017

Hi..
I wrote an essay tat is less than 300 words in independent.will tat greatly affect my score? Thnks

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  September 11, 2017
  
  Hi Aishwarya,
  
  Nope! You want to aim for 300-350 ideally, but if it isn’t too much shorter, no worries. 🙂
  
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Manu

September 30, 2017

Hi , i wrote the integrated essay of 400 words and i think it’s too long. How many marks are going to be deducted?

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  September 30, 2017
  
  Hi Manu,
  
  Marks would not be deducted for a long essay, but if the quality of that text is poor (content or grammar) then that would affect you. If the text is solid, though, 400 words is fine!
  
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Ayesha

November 17, 2017

Hey for my independent essay I had about 257 words. Will any marks be deducted?

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1. David Recine
  
  November 17, 2017
  
  The 300 word count is just a recommendation. So you certainly won’t automatically lost points for having 257 words. If you’ve managed to fully develop your essay and satisfy the criteria in the official TOEFL Writing rubric, you could get a decent score. However, 257 still is a bit low. It’s difficult to put together a fully developed written response unless you’re closer to 300 words, or slightly over. So a 257 word essay is more likely to get a lower score than an TOEFL Independent response that’s around 300 words.
  
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Armin

February 24, 2018

Hi, I have written an independent essay of 222 words, but it is fully developed, with introduction, two body paragraphs and conclusion, grammar is also normal, academic vocabulary is udes, how many scores are possible to get with this essay? Thank you

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  February 25, 2018
  
  Hi Armin,
  
  As we mentioned in this blog post, there is no specific grading on the length of the essay. Writing an essay with 222 words does not guarantee you a certain score or score range. In general, higher scoring essays tend to be longer, but that doesn’t mean that a shorter essay will automatically lower your score. The potential problem with a shorter essay is that you can’t fully develop your ideas. I recommend that you check out the TOEFL essay rubric and assess your essay according to that. Better yet, have someone else grade your essay for you 😀
  
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Delilah

June 18, 2018

My integrated essay is around 500 words. Could that be too much? The question asked for something “complete” so I included every detail from the text and the lecture.

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  June 19, 2018
  
  Hi Delilah,
  
  Whether or not this is “too much” depends on the quality of your writing! In general, 500 words is a pretty good length for the essay. However, you should make sure that your writing is clear and correct and that you don’t have a lot of errors. Just writing a lot won’t get you a good score on the essays–you also must write well 🙂 I recommend that you review your essays using the official essay rubric and see how you fare 🙂
  
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LUV PATEL

September 8, 2018

Hi Lucas, I just gave my Toefl and in writing section, wrote 350 words in Q1 (Integrated) and 558 words in Q2. However, I am feeling nervous whether such long essay would affect my writing score or not. I didn’t write with the intention of just making the essay longer and longer. Both the essays have been neatly written with proper structures (4 para) and nearly perfect Grammer. Though, I have not written those big or tough vocabulary words in the Q2 (independent) part. Can you give me any guidance how this will affect my score?
Thanks again for all your help and support throughout all your videos and blogs. I really appreciate you guys!!
Sincerely, Luv.

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  September 14, 2018
  
  Hi Luv,
  
  As Eliot mentions in this post, there is no word limit on the essays. If you wrote a strong, grammatically correct and well-structured essay, then there is no reason why the length would negatively affect your score. I know it’s difficult, but you’ll have to wait for your scores to be sure! I’m glad that you have enjoyed our blog and that we helped you out as you prepared for your exam 🙂
  
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Cece

October 29, 2018

Hi there! I was just wondering if there will be an automatic word counter for both writing tasks, or do we need to count how many words we have already used ourselves? Thank you.

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  November 1, 2018
  
  Hi Cece,
  
  Yes, there is a word counter on the screen when you take the test, so you will be able to track how long your essays are as you type them. 🙂 So, you won’t need to predict your word count at all.
  
  With that said, if you want to estimate your word count during practice, you can count the number of words in the first three lines, divide by 3, and then multiply by the total number of lines. 🙂 That will give you a good idea of how many words you have.
  
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2. RSP
  
  November 2, 2018
  
  This. Possibly the most relevant question in the comments here. And NO mention of it on the official ETS site.
  
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  1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
    
    November 3, 2018
    
    There will be a word count feature on the actual TOEFL exam. So you don’t need to worry about counting words! 🙂
    
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Maximiliano szarangowicz

November 16, 2018

Hi!
I just took the TOEFL iBT for the first time and ended up with a 250 word essay, I managed to write an introduction, body and conclusion in 4 paragraphs, but I ran out of time to elaborate the idea a little more, it was too concise
Is it really that bad? in my case I needed a total test score equivalent to a 6.5, ideally 7.0 IELTS, I believe this was the lowest point in my test, I left the classroom a little worried.
Cheers

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  November 20, 2018
  
  Hi Maximiliano.
  
  As we mention in this blog post, quality really does matter more than quantity. Unlike in the IELTS, there is no minimum word count in TOEFL essays. These are just recommendations. Unfortunately, it’s difficult to say with any certainty what your score will be–you will have to wait for the results of your exam and then decide how you will proceed! I know it’s stressful to have to wait for results, but try to relax a bit and enjoy the accomplishment of taking the test 🙂
  
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sandra

September 9, 2019

hi Lucas!
I have a question, I usually write the essay without really looking at the word count. I try to always focus on the content. However, sometimes after I finish the 3 points and contrast them, I feel there are still some small details that I need to add as a fourth paragraph. is that bad? will they deduct points? thank you!

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1. Magoosh Test Prep Expert
  
  December 7, 2019
  
  Hi Sandra 🙂 You definitely want to reach the recommended minimum word count. Once you’ve done that, focus on organization and development. Without knowing the specifics, I would say that small details don’t matter too much. Just make sure that each paragraph has a clear and specific purpose. Hope that helps!
  
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