IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Pie Chart with Model Answer

March 22, 2021

This IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 question type might make you a little hungry. That’s because we’re going over pie charts today! To help give you an idea of what to expect and how to write a response, let’s look at this pie chart practice question with a model band 9 essay.

To see why this essay is band 9, see our Band 9 essay with scorer commentary, and check out the official IELTS rubric for Task 1 (PDF).

This particular prompt is a pie chart. Your approach to this chart should be the same as your approach to any other Task 1 infographic Take a look at the information and think carefully. What is the best way to summarize the way the information is structured and the main points? From there, how can you best compare the most relevant pieces of information? Finally, how should you structure that summary and comparison? For more advice on how to approach this, see our article on IELTS Academic Task 1 paragraph structure, as well as our main page for IELTS sample questions and practice resources.

Try to do this prompt yourself. Then check out our band 9 model essay below the prompt and compare it to your own work to see how you did.

Model IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Prompt: Pie Chart

The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie graphs show differences in Chinese household spending in four essential categories. These categories are marked as percentages of total spending, with differences in spending for 1995 and 2011.

Food and clothing remained the largest categories in both years, with medicine and household goods remaining the smallest. Nonetheless, there were measurable changes in all four categories over the years. Changes to the household budget shares of food and medicine were particularly noticeable.

Both of the top two categories, clothing and food, shrank during this 16 year period. Clothing lost just 1% of its share, going from 19% to 18%, while food dropped more dramatically, starting at 68% but losing 9 points of share by 2011.

In both 1995 and 2011, medicine and household goods represented the lowest and second-lowest spending categories, respectively. Still, both gained a larger share of household spending in China by 2011. Medicine jumped 7 points from 4% to 11%, while household goods made a smaller but still-noticeable increase from 9 to 12 percent.

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2 responses to “IELTS Academic Writing Task 1: Pie Chart with Model Answer”

sirin

May 5, 2021

The pie charts show data about the proportion of money which people spent on 4 main categories in China, between 1995 and 2011.
İn general, more money reserved, which was a large proportion of pie charts, for food category.The proportion of household products and medicine was doubled total in 2 years.The percentage of money reserved for clothing category saw a decrease over the period in China.
When looked in detail, in the beginning of the period, food category had the proportion of 68%. However, the figure dropped significantly to 59%. Household products and medicine category started at 9% and 4%. When the figure of household products went up slightly to 12%, the figure of medicine accounted for 11% which was an overwhelming change.
The pie charts clearly show that, the amount of clothing category stood at 18%in 2011, which was 19% in the beginning.It is clear that clothing category had a minimal change.

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Jakhangir

November 24, 2022

The presented pie charts give information on household expenditures for staple commodities of the people of China. The charts indicate the changes for the years 1995 and 2011. Calibration of data is done in percentages and the outlays are represented by dividing them into 4 sections.
As an overall trend food and clothing remained the biggest category during the mentioned period. Whereas the other two groups of medicine and household utilities showed the same indices relative to one another by the end of the timeframe.
It is explicitly observed that spending on food stayed prevalent over the period demonstrating a slight change from 68% in 1995 to 59% in 2011. Expenses on clothing, likewise, mildly shrank from 19% to 18%.
Concerning expenses on medicine and household goods both witnessed a moderate ascent, the former started at 4% in 1995 and eventuated at 11% in 2011. On the other hand, household goods gained 3 points and uplifted from 9% at the beginning to
12% by the end of the span.

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