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\nMany college and TOEFL writing\u00a0resources will talk about concerns in the writing process. “Concerns” set the priorities for writing. In tutorials for any kind of\u00a0writing, you’ll often read about “higher order concerns” (sometimes called HOCs), and “lower order concerns” (or LOCs).<\/p>\n

The difference between “higher” and “lower” writing priorities<\/h2>\n

HOCs are “higher” because they have a higher<\/em> level of importance. These more important elements of writing\u00a0include paragraph and essay organization, introduction, and conclusion. Correct information and a valid argument are also top concerns.<\/p>\n

LOCs are\u00a0lower<\/em>, dealing with less important details. LOCs\u00a0may include spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, word choice… you get the idea. LOCs are smaller and easier to quickly correct.<\/p>\n

Which concerns you should deal with first<\/h2>\n

When you’re revising a piece of writing, it’s tempting to fix all the LOCs first. They’re so easy to correct\u00a0that\u00a0writers often want to get them out of the way before dealing with HOCs. This approach is a mistake.<\/p>\n

If you revise\u00a0the LOC areas first, you could waste\u00a0a lot of time. This is because making changes to high priority aspects of your writing– whole-essay structure, introductions, conclusions, that sort of thing– may cause you to completely rewrite or delete large parts of your original content.<\/p>\n

Suppose you start with the LOCs and make a whole bunch of revisions to spelling, grammar, etc… in a paragraph. Once you do some HOC revisions, you could realize\u00a0that \u00a0the paragraph actually doesn’t work well in your essay as a whole. From there you may have to delete the paragraph or completely re-write it. \u00a0And then all those little corrections you made just go away– they were a waste of time, because you were making corrections to a piece of writing you didn’t ultimately use.<\/p>\n

So most of the time, you’ll want to revise any academic essay based on the HOCs first, and then go back to make “lower” corrections.<\/p>\n

TOEFL Writing priorities for HOCs and LOCs<\/h2>\n

There’s another huge reason to deal with the HOCs first in your TOEFL Writing tasks– scoring! If you read the official score guides<\/a> for TOEFL Writing, you’ll see that higher order concerns dominate your Writing score in terms of weight. LOCs have much less impact on your score. In fact, it’s even possible to get a full five points on a writing assignment with some LOC errors.<\/p>\n

In official score guides, note that lower order concerns\u00a0only <\/em>start to hurt a test-taker’s TOEFL Writing score if the lower\u00a0priority errors become bad enough to affect the higher priority aspects of writing. If smaller errors create a “lapse in clarity or the connection of ideas” or are so bad they make a piece of writing hard to understand, then the LOCs can hurt your score.<\/p>\n

With the TOEFL Writing section’s time limits and its emphasis on HOCs, you want to focus on the higher order concerns first when you make revisions. After that, focus on the lower order concerns that might affect the higher order concerns (serious misspellings, very messy sentence structure, etc.). Proofread for truly minor errors at the end of your work on any TOEFL Writing task, and make such final small corrections only if you have time.<\/span><\/p>\n

By prioritizing your time in this way, you can make sure that you’re able to work on the top priorities– which have the biggest impact on your score– before the clock runs out.<\/span><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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