{"id":3539,"date":"2021-04-21T10:00:16","date_gmt":"2021-04-21T17:00:16","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/magoosh.com\/ielts\/?p=3539"},"modified":"2021-04-21T10:03:08","modified_gmt":"2021-04-21T17:03:08","slug":"ielts-writing-task-2-discussion-sample-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/magoosh.com\/ielts\/ielts-writing-task-2-discussion-sample-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"IELTS Writing Task 2: Discussion Sample Essay"},"content":{"rendered":"

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Today we’re going to look at a discussion essay IELTS sample that’s considered Band 9. This Band 9 scored essay matched the pattern for the “discussion” type of Writing Task 2 question. Discussion essays are sometimes also called “discuss both sides” essays. In this kind of essay, you will be presented with two statements of opinion that oppose each other. You will then be asked to “discuss both sides” of the debate, and to give your own opinion. For more information on this and other question types, including tips, tricks, and general advice for the discussion essay question type, see Magoosh’s full guide to IELTS Writing Task 2 question types<\/a>.<\/p>\n

Discussion Essay IELTS Sample: Band 9<\/h2>\n

The essay below is a band 9 model IELTS essay, patterned after Magoosh’s IELTS Writing Task 2 Template<\/a>.<\/p>\n

IELTS Writing Discussion Essay Practice Question<\/strong><\/h3>\n

Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.<\/p>\n

Write at least 250 words.<\/em><\/p>\n

Discussion Essay IELTS Sample Band 9 Response<\/strong><\/h3>\n

Choosing a career can be a challenging process. It can be difficult to say whether this decision should be made alone, or made with input from loved ones. In my opinion, it is best to find one’s career independently, with no more than a small amount of advice from family or friends. Below, I will explain why I feel that we must ultimately face career decisions on our own.<\/p>\n

Getting career guidance input from loved ones can be confusing rather than useful. Family and friends likely have different careers, and thus give different, conflicting advice. Suppose, for instance, that your father is a teacher, your mother is an accountant, and your best friend is a nurse. They have all made very different career decisions, and only have knowledge on their respective careers. Different people will likely only steer you to their careers, without giving good advice on your own best path.<\/p>\n

In contrast, focusing on one’s own preferences and skills provides a clearer path to the right career. After all, individuals have the best knowledge of their own abilities and interests. As an example, if someone has gone to university to study biology, they will know more about biology careers than a family member or friend who does not have that same kind of training. Ultimately, your career must be built on your own training and experience, not the training and experience of others.<\/p>\n

For the reasons I’ve outlined above, I really do believe that career decisions are a matter of personal knowledge. Other people, even trusted family and friends, simply cannot understand your career the way you can. To select your field of work wisely, you must face this important decision alone.<\/p>\n

Scorer Commentary (Discussion IELTS Essay Sample, Band 9)<\/strong><\/h3>\n

The score report below is based on the official IELTS Writing Task 2 rubric<\/a>. This report also looks very similar to the Magoosh IELTS essay scoring service<\/a>.<\/p>\n

Overall Band Score: 9<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n
CATEGORY<\/th>\nTask Achievement\/Response<\/th>\nCoherence and Cohesion<\/th>\nLexical Resource<\/th>\nGrammatical Range and Accuracy<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<\/thead>\n
SCORE<\/td>\n9<\/td>\n9<\/td>\n9<\/td>\n9<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n

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