{"id":1168,"date":"2017-01-16T07:47:30","date_gmt":"2017-01-16T15:47:30","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/magoosh.com\/ielts\/?p=1168"},"modified":"2019-01-24T20:05:06","modified_gmt":"2019-01-25T04:05:06","slug":"erros-comuns-na-escrita-ielts","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/magoosh.com\/ielts\/erros-comuns-na-escrita-ielts\/","title":{"rendered":"Erros Comuns na IELTS Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"

De acordo com o crit\u00e9rio de avalia\u00e7\u00e3o para tarefa 1<\/a> e a tarefa 2 da Writing<\/a> do IELTS, n\u00f3s sabemos que sua nota ser\u00e1 avaliada com base na coer\u00eancia e coes\u00e3o, gama de vocabul\u00e1rio e gram\u00e1tica da sua escrita. Vamos dar uma olhada nos erros comuns na IELTS Writing em termos de cada crit\u00e9rio. Veja tamb\u00e9m nossos Erros Comuns na Conversa\u00e7\u00e3o do IELTS para melhorar sua nota nesta se\u00e7\u00e3o! <\/p>\n

Erros de Coer\u00eancia e Coes\u00e3o <\/h2>\n

Teses sem nexo e ideias n\u00e3o relacionadas <\/strong>
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\nNa tarefa 2 da IELTS Writing, voc\u00ea precisa mostrar sua pr\u00f3pria opini\u00e3o com uma tese de afirma\u00e7\u00e3o clara no come\u00e7o e fortalecer essa opini\u00e3o com frases relacionados ao tema em cada par\u00e1grafo. Alguns estudantes ir\u00e3o dar opini\u00f5es neutras e argumentos que n\u00e3o se relacionam. Isso ir\u00e1 afetar bastante a pontua\u00e7\u00e3o porque falta coer\u00eancia e l\u00f3gica. Veja nosso post de Como Organizar as Ideias na Tarefa 2 da Reda\u00e7\u00e3o do IELTS<\/a> para descobrir como evitar esse problema.
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\nUso incorreto de palavras de transi\u00e7\u00e3o <\/strong>
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\nPalavras de transi\u00e7\u00e3o s\u00e3o usadas para conectar suas ideias de uma forma l\u00f3gica. O uso incorreto delas pode influenciar a l\u00f3gica das suas ideias. D\u00ea uma olhada nas palavras de transi\u00e7\u00e3o<\/a> e se familiarize com suas fun\u00e7\u00f5es!<\/p>\n

Erros de Gram\u00e1tica <\/h2>\n

Os erros mais comuns na IELTS Writing s\u00e3o gram\u00e1tica. Aqui est\u00e3o alguns tipos de erros gramaticais que voc\u00ea pode cometer em seu pr\u00f3prio texto.
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\nFormas verbais erradas<\/strong>
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\nAlguns estudantes ir\u00e3o esquecer de mudar o verbo para o plural, passado ou partic\u00edpio mesmo que saibam o tempo verbal certo em suas cabe\u00e7as. Aqui est\u00e1 um exemplo de frase com o tempo verbal errado: This chart point out that teenagers use Internet more frequently than other groups of people in UK (Este gr\u00e1fico mostra que adolescentes usam a internet mais frequentemente que outros grupos de pessoas no Reino Unido). Point<\/em><\/strong> deveria ser trocado para points<\/strong><\/em>.
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\nInconsist\u00eancia dos tempos verbais <\/strong>
\nInconsist\u00eancia dos tempos verbais n\u00e3o \u00e9 apenas um erro comum na conversa\u00e7\u00e3o do IELTS mas tamb\u00e9m um erro frequente na reda\u00e7\u00e3o. Tamb\u00e9m ir\u00e1 afetar a coer\u00eancia da sua escrita se voc\u00ea confundir os tempos. Aqui est\u00e1 um exemplo de frase com este tipo de inconsist\u00eancia: When I was a child, I like to play football with my friends (Quando eu era uma crian\u00e7a, eu gosto de jogar futebol com os meus amigos). When I was a child<\/em> <\/strong>indica que a a\u00e7\u00e3o a seguir aconteceu no passado. Portanto, like<\/em><\/strong> deveria estar no passado.
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\nFrases cont\u00ednuas<\/strong>
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\nFrases cont\u00ednuas se referem \u00e0 aglutina\u00e7\u00e3o de duas ora\u00e7\u00f5es independentes com erros de pontua\u00e7\u00e3o e sem conjun\u00e7\u00f5es coordenadas. Aqui est\u00e1 um exemplo de uma frase cont\u00ednua: We went to the park we bought some drinks (N\u00f3s fomos ao parque n\u00f3s compramos algumas bebidas). We went to the park<\/strong><\/em> e we bought some drinks<\/em><\/strong> s\u00e3o duas ora\u00e7\u00f5es independentes. Voc\u00ea pode uni-las com a conjun\u00e7\u00e3o coordenada and<\/strong><\/em> ou separ\u00e1-las com um ponto final (.<\/strong>). <\/p>\n

Erros de Vocabul\u00e1rio<\/h2>\n

Recurso lexical limitado<\/strong>
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\nRecurso lexical limitado pode tamb\u00e9m diminuir sua nota, pois significa que voc\u00ea n\u00e3o tem conhecimento de vocabul\u00e1rio suficiente. Uma forma de evitar esse problema \u00e9 usar palavras diferentes quando se referir ao mesmo significado. Aqui est\u00e1 uma frase de exemplo com recurso lexical limitado: I like traveling because I like unexpected things and I like meeting other people (Eu gosto de viajar porque eu gosto de coisas inesperadas e gosto de conhecer outras pessoas).<\/em><\/strong> Esta afirma\u00e7\u00e3o pode ser melhorada assim: I love traveling because I like meeting people and experiencing unexpected things (Eu amo viajar porque gosto de conhecer pessoas e experimentar coisas inesperadas).<\/em><\/strong>
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\nRedund\u00e2ncia<\/strong>
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\nRedund\u00e2ncia se refere \u00e0 repeti\u00e7\u00e3o de significado. Aqui est\u00e1 um exemplo: Computer plays a crucial and important role in current society (O computador \u00e9 parte importante e crucial na sociedade moderna). Crucial<\/em> <\/strong>e important<\/strong><\/em> compartilham o mesmo significado de que algo tem muita import\u00e2ncia. Portanto, uma delas pode ser omitida sem mudar o significado da frase original.
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\nOrtografia Errada<\/strong>
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\nOrtografia errada tamb\u00e9m \u00e9 um erro comum na reda\u00e7\u00e3o do IELTS. Veja aqui as 100 palavras que alunos mais erram<\/a>!
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\n 
\nEsta postagem apareceu originalmente em ingl\u00eas no Magoosh blog<\/a> e foi traduzida por Jonas Lomonaco.<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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