# Typical Flaws in AWA Prompts

Get to know the common flaws, so you recognize them quickly on test day!

The GMAT analytical writing prompt will typically be a weak argument.  Part of analyzing it will necessarily involve discussing its flaws.  One of the biggest and most common flaws is a faulty assumption, discussed in greater detail here: https://magoosh.com/gmat/verbal/critical-reasoning/arguments-and-assumptions-on-the-gmat/ .  Here is a list of other common flaws in AWA prompts, with example prompts in the OG (page numbers are given in OG 13).

## 1) Vague words

The words “few”, “many”, “more”, “less”, and “some”, by themselves without numerical qualification, can be vague.  For example, suppose I say: “In Happytown, more people buy Smiley Doughnuts than buy Chipper Cookies.”  What does that mean?  Let’s say, for the sake of argument, we even know that Happytown has 1000 adults residents.  Does the statement mean: 995 buy Smiley Doughnuts and only 5 buy Chipper Cookies, a landslide difference? Or, does it mean: 501 buy Smiley Doughnuts and 499 buy Chipper Cookies, essentially no difference?  Always consider the range of possibilities contained in vague words comparing quantity or size.

OG example prompt: “Speedee airline … offering more flights to more destinations than ever before” — how many more? (p. 812, top prompt)

## 2) Inappropriate Comparisons

This form presents a premise and conclusion for Thing #1, which is often quite clear and undisputable.  Then, it argues, Thing #2 is very similar, so the premise and conclusion should apply to Thing #2 as well.  Depending on the situation, the comparison may not be apt, and pointing out Thing #2 differs from Thing #1 in ways relevant to the argument can expose an essential flaw.

OG example prompt: Obesity in humans and dogs —- is the obesity problem in humans identical to the obesity problem in dogs?  Is human metabolism similar enough to canine metabolism?  (p. 811, bottom prompt)

## 3) Errors in Causality

Many arguments want to make the case that “A causes B.”  Whenever the argument “A causes B” is presented, some alternative interpretations to consider are (1) the reverse, “B causes A”; or (2) “A and B are both caused by new thing C”, or (3) “A and B, for a variety of reasons, often appear together, but one does not cause the other.”  (This last interpretation is summed up succinctly in the sentence: “Correlation does not imply causality.”)  Learn to spot arguments that draw conclusions of causality, and questions whether that’s the correct relationship.

OG example prompt: “the Cumquat Café” argument: is the old location “causing” the difficulties for the three subsequent businesses?  (p. 807, bottom prompt)

## 4) Basic Economics

You are not expected to know advanced economics for the GMAT AWA.  You are expected to understand very basic economic facts, like the Law of Supply and Demand.  Suppose an argument suggests that lowering a price would increase sales — true, but the question is: would the price have to be lowered so much that it would obliterate any profits?

OG example prompt: “The country of Sacchar” —- how much will it have to lower sugar prices?  would selling sugar at that low price be worth it? (p. 806, third prompt)

## 5) Sampling Problems

Inferential statistics regularly uses information from a rigorously selected sample to draw a powerful conclusion about the larger population.  That’s great, and we are used to that. The problem is: authors will sometimes draw conclusions from samples that do not withstand analysis.  “Conclusion X works for A, B, and C, so it should work for everything in the category” — do A, B, and C adequately represent everything else in the category?

OG example prompt: “Avia Airlines” – do the few folks who filed a formal complaint constitute a fair representation of everyone who was in any way unhappy with the airline?? (p. 806, second prompt)

## 6) Overconfident Conclusions

If you read the NY Times or the Wall Street Journal or the Economist magazine, you will notice the kind of tone the GMAT favors: thoughtful, balanced, and measured.  Extreme conclusions are seldom correct on the GMAT.  Any AWA prompt that presents a conclusion with God-given certainty is too strong, and this is a flaw that needs to be addressed.

OG example prompt: Vista Studio’s move sequel —- the use of the word “undoubtedly” in the conclusion make that conclusion too uncompromising.  (p. 814, top prompt)

## Recognize the Common Patterns

If you become familiar with these patterns, and learn how to attach and expose each kind of flaw, then you will be much better prepared to analyze the argument in your AWA essay on test day.

### 3 Responses to Typical Flaws in AWA Prompts

1. Faye October 10, 2017 at 3:19 am #

Hey! If you reorganize the wording of each type a little, you can actually arrange them into a useful mnemonic:

VOICES:

Vague words
Overly confident conclusions
Inappropriate comparisons
Causality
Economic sense
Sampling

• Magoosh Test Prep Expert October 10, 2017 at 10:27 am #

This is awesome, Faye! This is an excellent acronym that can be used to remember these flaws. Thanks for sharing 🙂

2. Gio December 3, 2015 at 4:38 pm #

Mike, before I pose my question, I want to let you know that I’m a huge fan of your blog postings.

Is the list of “common” flaws above ranked by how common they show up on the exam? After reading the “Vague Words” flaw, you had me asking myself: could major, or “common”, flaws in AWA prompts possibly be designed to be equally common?

I hope this makes sense – common seems like a vague word. Thank you!!

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